Well Day 2 arrives and with some minor tweaking, we’ve come up with the following:


From Salem 1692, transported to a fantastical realm, 5 teens must find the key to saving the world from disaster, before it finds them first


Just a minor tweak to make sure there is no confusion. Hopefully this will be the one I submit – but time will tell.

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1   douglas esper    http://www.douglasesper.com
April 2nd, 2011 at 5:08 pm

crazy what one changed word can do for a pitch. i think your choice was very wise. i could see the wording leading people down 2 roads..as if unsure if the word “it” describes the key or the disaster…or perhaps the key is also the disaster.

maybe 5 teens race in search of a key that will prevent ultimate disaster.

or 5 teens race to find a key that can mean savior or disaster…

i guess without knowing for sure what the “it” is that’s all i got…but either way i am hooked so good show chap
douglas esper

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